Do you have a brother? Have you ever felt
jealous because he has much strength than you? What do you feel if some of your
friends adore him? My brother's name is Dodick. He is often called Dodick
Kaminari by his friends because he is like thunder that always makes many
people become surprised, amazed, and wonder with all of his acts. Actually, my
brother is very attractive, creative, and curious about everything in which it
makes me proud of him and he can inspire me to be a better person.
My brother is an attractive boy. He is handsome and very stylish
in wearing certain clothes. He has exotic brown skin which makes him more
impressive. He is tall and dashing. My brother has shiny dark hair and pointed
nose which makes some of my friends adore him. Besides, his smooth oval face
without acne and his dark eyes attracts every girl who sees him. Furthermore,
he has his own style in wearing his clothes which cannot be doubted. Honestly,
he does not have much money to buy any branded and expensive clothes but he can
look so classy with his cheap clothes. His style is so different from the
others. He always can make every girl becomes fascinated with him.
I feel that he is a creative person as well. He likes to modify
something which is ordinary and less valuable to be more worthwhile and
innovative. In his bed room, there are so many goods which he modifies. The
most creative thing in his bed room is the wall there. He stuck many posters in
all part of the wall there when he was in junior high school. He made the
posters by himself in which they were very creative and inspiring. Furthermore,
he also created a chair by obsolete and crumpled newspaper. Now, he put it near
the window. It looks so unique. The other is his bicycle. Actually, three years
ago, it was a rusty bicycle which was never used for aged and the style also
was very ancient. However, he could modify it to be a qualified bicycle with
eccentric style which was different from the other bicycle. His creativeness
makes everything so unique and more valuable.
My brother is also a curious one. He always wants to try something
new. There are a lot of his strange behaviors because of his curiosity. One of
them is snail rice. He is very curious with this small and slow animal. He
often went to the rice field with his friends to find some snail rice. He is
also curious with the taste of that animal so that he often used snail rice as
material to make some food. Those were satay, soup, and so on. He could make it
became so delicious. I realize that my brother can develop his curiosity to be
something which is more precious.
In short, my brother is an inspiring person. He is unique and
different from others. I should not be jealous with him but should be proud of
him. It is because I can learn everything from him. His attractiveness,
creativity, and curiosity make me believe and realize that we do not need to be
rich and well-known to be adored by other people in which we just need to be
who we are. I believe that he will be successful person in the future.

Wow, He really is someone that we can learn many thing from...
ReplyDeletei wish I can be like that too
well, a touching writing like always ita :D
Well, he is very inspiring person for me,, Remember, don't be someone else Bhis... like i said in the last paragraph, we just need to be who we are.
ReplyDeleteYou are an inspiring person too who has your own uniqueness...
Thank you for the comment bhisma :)
well, same like bhisma, I also wish I can be like him who is inspiring my younger brothers. your story has a powerful. when we read it, we will feel the same feeling as you are. using many vocabularies on your story are very useful for the reader. your grammar is correct, I could not find any mistakes on it. well done ita, I'll wait for your next touching story.
ReplyDeletewow, your brother is wonderful man. his curiosity and creativity is so unique.
ReplyDeleteactually i also have older brother. he is good man and also has uniqueness which make him have many friends because he is sociable man.
well, your writing is great, it can inspire other including me and i think i don't find any mistakes on you writing.
Good job :)
I really agree with you ita..
ReplyDeleteHaving a brother is something Lucky for me because I also have a brother and he really cares to me ita :)
I like your story Ita, but I think it would be better if in this sentence " He has exotic brown skin which makes him more impressive' change the word ' skin' become ' complexion' . ' He has exotic brown complexion which makes him more impressive'.
overall your writing is good Ita :) I like your story :)