Salendri is one of my friends who is very different from all of my friends. She was my roommate one year ago. She always made me crazy every day. Salendri is a very greedy and she never cleaned our room. She often ate my food and snacks. She rarely took a bath and never wanted to waste her rubbish in the dustbin. How mad I was having a roommate like her? But, I realize now that there is no one who is perfect. Actually, Salendri taught me everything in which she is very confident, thrifty, and diligent. I often come to her new boarding house because I am proud having a special friend like her.
Salendri is very confident with herself. She never feels down about her appearance. Honestly, she is an ordinary girl who does not have any attractive appearance which makes her becomes special girl. She is fat and tall. She has thick black hair and brown skin. Salendri is ordinary in dressing as well. She never cares about how she wears clothes and the mode. Her clothes are very simple and rarely ironed. However, she never feels as bad or ugly girl. She is always confident with who she is.
Salendri is very thrifty one. She never wastes money to buy something which is not important. Even, she sometimes does not buy any crucial needs such as hand body lotion, soap, and some books for her college. I remember that when she was my roommate, she often used my hand body lotion and the soap as well. Salendri often borrowed some books from her seniors so that she did not need to spend much money to buy them. Besides, Salendri seldom does shopping at supermarket. She prefers to buy her needs at market because the price is cheaper than in the supermarket. I can learn to be thrifty from her. She is so inspiring.
She is a diligent person. She never postpones in doing her assignment. She does it seriously. Salendri always wakes up at 5 a.m. every day for studying. She is very diligent to study. She is always on time to go to the college and never late to submit her assignment. I can learn from her. I really hope that I can be a diligent person like her.
Indeed, Salendri is my special friend who can teach me everything. I love her so much. She can inspire me to be a better person. Her confidence, the way she manages her money, and her diligence in doing her assignment and studying as well make me feel that she is a special friend and I am lucky having a friend like her.
Wow. You have an amazing friend, right? :D
ReplyDeleteIf I have that kind of friend, maybe I will feel shocked when the first time I met her. However, I agree with you. Every people have their own uniqueness and characteristic and there are so many things that we can learn from it. You are so lucky to have a friend like her, Ita. She is so special. :)
Generally, your writing is well done. You have done your best. Thank you :)
Ya widya, there is no one who is perfect. She is one of my close friend who can teach me everything.
ReplyDeleteThank you for the comment :)
The diction and the progress of the story are good
ReplyDeletethe way you describe your friend is also easy-to-grasp
awesome.. please introduce me to her, kay ? ;)
Ya, i really know her because she was my roommate one year ago... i think that you will know her later because she is in the same university with us..
Deleteso be patient Bhis..
thank you for the comment :)
I agree with you Ita ..having a close friend is something fun for me..
DeleteI like your story ita ... :)
but in this sentence 'Salendri is a very greedy and she never cleaned our room.' I think the words ' a very greedy', it would be better if you remove 'a' become 'Salendri is very greedy' or you let word 'a' but adding noun after the adjective for example ' Salendri is a very greedy roommate/ friend'.
overall your writing is good ita :)
Thank you so much Gita. Oh, I miss a word.
DeleteFrom your comment, i realize that I need to learn more about grammar and also to be more careful when i write my writing,,,